Comments : In my dreams

  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Awe! very well written!
    5/5
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats similar a bit to my poems A little girls dream or I dream.

    youve written this very well its a otuching subject. well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awww. i can relate. 5/5. amazing poem. sad but beautiful. ~KM~