Its too much?

by Nicole   May 7, 2008


A bad morning leading to a horrible day... its Murphy's law i swear!!
felt like giving in... giving up...
nearly collapsed on several occasions...
messaged you... you were too busy to help me. strike three I'm out and down for the count.

should've gone to camp instead of working hard for the exhibition.
should've rested and eaten...
should've got so much more done...

Too tired now to focus and work...
tired and my body aches all over...
struggling to breathe already

know I'm breathing... but feeling choked
feel lost... broken
hope it all goes away by tomorrow there still too much to do

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good one, well done x

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmm... this was an interesting read..
    i liked it..
    its like all your thoughts are in poetic form .. u know .. which is a good thing ..adds to the expressiveness..
    i've been reading some of your work .. and i must say .. u really move from topics swiftly .. which i would say is a good thing ..
    Good Job!

    ~Wake~

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