Thats deep. very strong feelings. hope it helps calm you down to write them out, keep writing xx

Now anyone tell me... Anyone goiun thru tis poem will see a professional poet not a Amateur...

Really a fantastic write... Shakesphere wud have been proud of u if he wud hav read this one...

Keep it up...

best wishz...
Karan

Very well constructed lines and very nice style of writing. It's a wonderful poem.

Great job, this poem is very honest and nicely written! =]