Unmasked

by xoOrdinaryGirlox   May 7, 2008


So cold, so lonely, so quiet, so alone,
Hidden among the anxiety created.
So lost, so afraid, so weak, so crushed,
Unaware of the anguish as she rested.

Something inside just makes him snap,
He's injured her, though never like this before,
His shouting escalates and she awakes,
Then suddenly she ends up on the floor.

Tears roll silently down her cheeks,
She fixes her stare on him, confused and dazed,
Clutching her stomach as tight as possible,
Frighted at the side of him he just portrayed.

He rushes off again, shocked at what he'd done,
Whilst she's left, struggling for breath,
Looking down, blood started seeping through,
She realized she was close to death.

Grabbing a pen with what little strength she has
She begins to write on the nearest wall
"You've finally revealed your true side to me"
And with no more life left to give, to floor she falls.

He comes back, finding her lying there, lifeless
Realizing what he has done, he cries out for help
Though now beyond help, he hugs her once more
Just goes to show, what can lie behind closed doors.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This poem is brillaint, you have made a fantastic job, well donei loved it xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow!!! This poem is just amazing, brought me to tears... I love the stanza before the last, the way she wrote a message for him and not a message to the police, it shows just how much she loves him... great write... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Very powerful!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by VioletViolence

    ...Wow