Comments : Make-Believe...

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Awww. babe. this is an amazing poem!
    I loved the feeling that you put into it and your word choice.
    You did a wonderful job of writting with your heart, and not with your head.
    My favorite is the last stanza.. its sums it all up really well.
    Keep up the great work sweetie..
    and hang in there..
    everything will work out!
    ilysm!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Aaawww girly this was amazing i loveit i love it it wasso sweet i love the emotion in it! great job keep up the great work!^_^