Frozen

by BlueEyedMystery   May 7, 2008


Crystallized candy surrenders to the ground.
Wrought from the very essence of malice.

Sway to this glacial melody,
With your lips made of frost.
Sing gently, this frigid song,
And your words will be lost.

Icicles are falling, piercing my fragile skin.
Blue liquid seeps out, to taint the snow.

Bleeding Blizzard blood,
Still dancing to this song.
Head swarming with lies,
Of a love that was wrong.

Seduced by moonlight, on a wintry day.
Leaden steps fall from feet that have wept.

Fall into the frosty ocean,
Let the ice hold your heart.
Love is only a fairytale,
That rips your soul apart.

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I had writer's block, so this probably isn't as good as it could have been. ><

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  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Love the last line. How love is only a fairy tale. sweetacular! a 5/5 indeed.

  • 16 years ago

    by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX

    I really love this poem. It is very well written and has a smooth flow. The symbolism you used was amazing...it was if i could actually feel the cold emotions chilling the heart of the narrator. I think the form you wrote the poem in added to the overall dramatic feel. I can't find anything wrong with it even though i tried. I'm adding it to my favorites. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Voice and Tender Heart

    Love the poem! Thanks for sharing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica93

    Wow Cacye my lil freaky girl!!! i loved it... it had an amazing flow and it gave me shivers!!! 5/5 hun!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadeflower

    I really love this poem. Wish I could write like this.
    Specially love the end of it:

    Fall into the frosty ocean,
    Let the ice hold your heart.
    Love is only a fairytale,
    That rips your soul apart.

    This just hits straight into ones mind.
    Thanks for amazing reading!

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