Comments : One big step(first love for her)

  • 16 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    Hey buddy that shocks me that you are trying somthing new.... but wow bro who is it?... but anyway 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    Who exactly are you talking about? just wondering!!! well umm yeah you should so try to call me tonight please!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by REESEY

    AWWW THAT IS SOOO CUTE.......POETRY IS THE BEST WAY TO GO...LOL...:)IT WAS A CUTE POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is very sweet lol
    Great job and good luck ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Very nice Travis.. Good luck my Dear friend nd Brother.. with trying something new.. great poem. keep it up!!..^-^.. Love ya bro!!..

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Nice poem, flows well and really straight foward. Like the way you share your emotions, good luck trav hope all goes well

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Awsome poem trav.keep it up.(this one goes in the book)5/5
    **harlea