by Unrequited May 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
**I personally believe this piece works best if you read quickly** |
by Lonely Rider
Well written... it seems a collection of random thoughts ... well composed.. |
That was original...the idea was kinda different and new...And I followed the rule:p and read it quickly..I did love it so much..keep it up:)5/5.. |
by Baby Rainbow
I agree, it has a good quick flow but i think it will be better if you break it up maybe and make it long and choppy? that would work best for me reading it, just my opinion but it would work really well it hink. |