Comments : Caucasion

  • 16 years ago

    by Narphangu

    I suppose I don't really understand this one. ...You know, funny poems don't have to be nonsensical.
    You seem rather tied up to the rhymes... Try some free verse, it might loosen you up a bit!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cierra

    I didnt really understand the motive of this or the moral what message were you trying to imply nice work with the rhyming though

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Manliguis

    Well i wrote this as a homework assignment...lol...she didnt say it needed to make sense as long as it rhymed...lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Eli

    Haha you racist fu-ck, I like it though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Manliguis

    Hey im caucasian also