Comments : You and Me

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Sad but true, some relationships just wont work at a distance. great poem meaning and rhymed wer a winner!

  • 16 years ago

    by MrPurple

    You shouldn't emphasize too much on the rhymes, but more on the message, other than a few "random" or "missplaced" lines.
    I thought the poem was pretty nice =)