Life on the Edge

by Aaron Deevers   May 7, 2008


I stand here on this edge
Looking into the far distance
Wondering to end this life of pain
Thinking of all I have done
From the bad to the good
Believing I never touched a person
Or even made a small impact to them
Life seems so distance right now
But as I stand here I realize
There are many years to come
Many people to meet and help
A positive reason to live
Live I will succeed I hope

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Life on d edge.. is a nice n neat poem..

    Loved it.. Keep it up,

    best wishz.... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    Oh this piece deeply touched and moved me, so much pain and sadness expressed Then finding hope and belief to keep going

    "But as I stand here I realize
    There are many years to come
    Many people to meet and help
    A positive reason to live
    Live I will succeed I hope"

    Beautiful piece, so much you have touched upon, what bravery...
    Not just that but you gave it a tender blowing flow which eased such a rhythm beating from your heart..5/5 Aaron

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Great message in the end. Loved the thoughts you have put in this one. Great write friend

    all the best and take care

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