Ocean

by Wake   May 7, 2008


Our faces fall apart
forever, you just cant outwit your life
I know of a thousand blenching starts
forever, they fight against the one's who'll win.

...I had a sour illusion
...inside my mind a fusion
...Qualms & confusions.
...of the post and where it ends.

Don't walk away
I'm not strong enough
to cross this ocean alone.
Don't walk away
How far would i reach
drifting on my own?

...Farther and farther i fall
...nothing left to win
...With a broken upper hand
...he reaches out and pulls me in.

I know I'm not one of them
who's backs i recognize
from a distance,
Its hard to take it in my stride.
.I know i am to blame
.for in you , i tried to confide
.My existence
.and now I'm slowly wearing thin.

...Lived life for a deception
...now on the other side of affection
...the hopeful part of a dejection
...I'll turn around and spread.

These broken wings,
still bold enough
to ride the ocean's winds.
I know you think,
How far would i go
dancing in the rain ?

...Farther and farther,I keep on falling...

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Written by Wake

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    So sad, the words are so touching.. It is easy to picture what is going on in the poem and makes me feel helpless in a way >.< Maybe because I can relate with the feeling of being alone and wishing someone was there to help. At those times it's always nice to have a friend to talk to. They listen and make life easier =)

    Very well written poem and very touching. 5/5 Keep up the awesome work. ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Omg... ths is gorgeaous. you are an amazing writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    I really enjoyed this poem. It was a great piece, and honestly, I didn't see anywhere where it could be improved. My favourite part:

    "...I had a sour illusion
    ...inside my mind a fusion
    ...Qualms & confusions.
    ...of the post and where it ends"

    The unique style and flow made it a very enjoyable read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Keep going, this is great work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    An amazing piece of work and your style is really unique. Every line just fell into place and the whole tone was set out straight from the start. Keep it up! 5/5