by Wake May 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Our faces fall apart |
So sad, the words are so touching.. It is easy to picture what is going on in the poem and makes me feel helpless in a way >.< Maybe because I can relate with the feeling of being alone and wishing someone was there to help. At those times it's always nice to have a friend to talk to. They listen and make life easier =) |
Omg... ths is gorgeaous. you are an amazing writer. |
by S R P
I really enjoyed this poem. It was a great piece, and honestly, I didn't see anywhere where it could be improved. My favourite part: |
by Baby Rainbow
Keep going, this is great work xx |
by Ash
An amazing piece of work and your style is really unique. Every line just fell into place and the whole tone was set out straight from the start. Keep it up! 5/5 |