I love this from the beginning to the end. The message is excellently conveyed and truly meaningful. I agree with this poem.
The atmosphere within whole piece is very vivid and effective. Also, your creativity shines through every stanza of this poem.

- Sitting here with the same pen,
Writing words I've seen to many times.
Sitting back observing the same
old day with a different name.-
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excellent beginning, it pulled me straight into this piece. Amazing stanza with so powerful message. I can deeply relate to this feeling.

- The world we live in a mechanical metropolis,
Systematically we walk to the machine.
Scan our eyes so we're not late,
Adjust the tie for the cameras.-
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My favorite stanza. I like your descriptions, they made the poem more effective. The choice of words here is fantastic. Details in this stanza are remarkable.

The ending is also great, it summed up this poem excellently.

Keep writing!