How..?

by H E Losey   May 8, 2008


How many times can one love?
How deep can love lost hurt?
How often can forgiveness come?
How soon can the pain Revert?

How many boys, how many girls?
How many dreams unfilled?
How many drops are in the sea?
How many loves have chilled?

How many others eyes have seen?
How often have we erred?
How deep are these memories?
How strong do we still care?

Published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like what you were saying here. Here are just some thoughts:

    "How many times can one love?
    How deep can love lost hurt?
    How often can forgiveness come?
    How soon can the pain Revert?"

    First off, it doesn't really grab the reader's attention with every line starting with how. Try to find other words to place in so it is not so boring line after line. If you can't find other words, maybe try to rearrange each stanza so you can fit different words in. But, I do like what is after each how. Just try to use other words, and not the same ones. Keep writing!