by Blissful
I really enjoyed the style you chose to write this piece because it truly fitted what you had to say. The emotions were and ones I could tell came straight from the heart. The feeling of missing someone and wanting them there is one I am sure many could relate with which made this poem even more of a joy to read because I could see myself in your words. The flow was great and the message was filled with power. Well done *5/5* |
I know none of us know exactly what you going through, but the way you described your emotions; we can almost imagine the pain and anger your going through. its full of powerfull emotions, you did great expressing yourself. keep up the good work. |
by noha
Beautiful poem ,i know how you feel when suddenly everything change and fears everywhere,worry kill you slowly,nice to write all this in your beautiful words,well done,5/5 |
I really liked this poem for being a free verse... I can relate to a certain degree to this poem.. I think I've been about 2/3 of the way there from what you are feeling... but not all the way... either way.. I could tell all the emotion you placed in the poem and it showed through while reading it. Good job! Keep it up. 5/5 |
I really liked this poem for being a free verse... I can relate to a certain degree to this poem.. I think I've been about 2/3 of the way there from what you are feeling... but not all the way... either way.. I could tell all the emotion you placed in the poem and it showed through while reading it. Good job! Keep it up. 5/5 |
by holly
I really liked this poem. I followed the thoughts as they went and the lack of a rhythm made certain words stand out. The emotions in it were clear without having to be overemphasized. |
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful write... very emotional.. |
by H E Losey
Again I enjoyed your write. This one was very interesting and i really like how you changed stanzas. Thought your final stanza well employed |
Where are you? |
Hmm actually never saw a poem like this before, but i understand the reason behind it. the part thatjumps out at me is when you call him a jerk it seemed a little childish made you sound like idk 13 yrs old, and the repition of needing him and then callling him that showed a great deal of idk assurance withy yourself. great work i really did enjoy it. - |
by e LIZ a beth
I love love love this poem, you suck! |
by ReinaPuente
I really like this poem i can really feel its pain |