This poem really touched me. It is amazing and so true. It's something I have went through personally. 5/5

Brillaint work hunny!! keep it up xx

Great ending

Thanx 4 commenting on mine!! this is brilliant-very sad : ( im gonna read more of yours now cuz this was so good well done!!xxx

This write truly hit home for me...Its an amazing write that i think alot of people can relate to. The wording flowed perfectly and i loved this poem heaps. Keep writing, ur poems are amazing. 5/5

Wow this poem is a bit broad but its a good thing i love the flow and power behind your words it truly is amazing and i can realte so its really hit me and im brinking on tears in the middle of class so yeah its great

YOU HAVE ALOT OF TALENT.
THANKZ 4 UR COMMENT! I REALLY APPRECEATE IT.... I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM ALOT SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH IT.
KEEP UR UR GOOD WORK!!!!