Internal Suffering

by Goodbye   May 8, 2008


I walk this little path
on my bare feet
My skin is feet
has changed so hard
they have walk too much
It is pretty long way
to get home from here

I am crying but tears don't come
my heart beats too fast,
I am burning out
You drive me to getting heartache
You drive me madness in this behaving

Could any of you explain me
Could any of you comfort my soul
Could any of you show right
direction to home?

Sun is burning my face red
I run my very last mile
I fall on sand
Stress is relieved
tears come out
I am lying down
I died.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Itz a sad poem.... keep writing,

    Best wishz,

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    A very pathetic poem reminding me the lines of T.S.Eliot's Waste Land where the travellers are longing for water and right direction but they do not get support.If we want to win we have to survive ourselves.good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    A very pathetic poem reminding me the lines of T.S.Eliot's Waste Land where the travellers are longing for water and right direction but they do not get support.If we want to win we have to survive ourselves.good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    That last stanza made my throat dry. soo good!

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