by Bugg May 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Watch out, I break a little too easily |
by Lady Nik
I really love the way you write. It's very powerful and as a cutter I can really relate to what your saying. For someone who doesn't cut you did an amazing job with displaying the emotions of a cutter. Very nice work. Shanik |
by Alma
Wow this is such a strong piece of poetry |
by benjamin
These are poems i allways have immagined reading.. it tells of people in real life. whether its the writer or a friend.. so much emotion.. i like the last part when the mother finds the razer and can feel her pain by the porcelain doll breaking and that the doll used to be her and now the daughter is nothing like it .. so its no longer a twin its just a doll and so that form of the girl goes away .. as does the doll |
Watch out, I break a little too easily |
This is a really sad poem i like it though i can relate i use to cut |