by Conrad
Wow. nice poem. i love that the viewpoint is from a doll. =] |
by Baby Rainbow
Thisis very different, loved the style well done xx |
by Bugg
Oh, no, this poem is not about me. I don't cut; I am 100% against self-harm. I just thought I'd write a poem about it. It was a completely spontaneous write. |
by Brenda
Awz. this poem was really heart-felt. it's not right for someone to have to think they have to be perfect. to think that they have to be what everyone wants them to be. i'll stop with the `wisdom words` for now. i'm probably confusing you. |
Porcelain. The way you related porcelain and pain in this poem was great. I loved the second stanza the most it setted up a setting for me. |
This poem flowed well and agian it is fortunate that it is not based on experience |
This is a really sad poem i like it though i can relate i use to cut |
Watch out, I break a little too easily |
by benjamin
These are poems i allways have immagined reading.. it tells of people in real life. whether its the writer or a friend.. so much emotion.. i like the last part when the mother finds the razer and can feel her pain by the porcelain doll breaking and that the doll used to be her and now the daughter is nothing like it .. so its no longer a twin its just a doll and so that form of the girl goes away .. as does the doll |
by Alma
Wow this is such a strong piece of poetry |
by Lady Nik
I really love the way you write. It's very powerful and as a cutter I can really relate to what your saying. For someone who doesn't cut you did an amazing job with displaying the emotions of a cutter. Very nice work. Shanik |