This poem is absolutely incredible. There is so much emotion and truth within it. Anyone who has been there knows of the idea that if others see what we do, they cry ATTENTION, when we are the ones with real problems and never wanted them to see it in the first place. Your word choice is flawless and it captured my attention from beginning to end. Wonderful piece of work love!

Thisis brillaint, you weite so well, never give up xxx