This is an absolutely magnificent piece of poetry 5/5

"Everyone dies,
But not everyone lives,
Can you experience this world,
For all that it gives?"

this is an amazing stanza and the whole meaning of the poem, what you're saying, rings quite true. =)

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Yo i'm feeling this poem i know what you mean though like the flow keep it up...

First stanza you have "Is" and it should be "If"
Other than that amazing

I loved how you compared it to cancer. It's, in a way, very similar to it. (:

Wonder,wonder,wonderful job. (:

I love this poem sooo much... all true statements and I know I would change a whole lot of things. I think I will go out and venture more. Then again that may lead to some regrets:)

Wow i really like this poem. i love how it will make people think. your words are strong, keep it up

This makes me think that life is EVIL!
dont scare me ninja! i like life!
=]
makes me not wanna breathe... cuz then im just like... dying haha scary.
great job <3333333333333333
--i love my ninja!!!!!!!!!!!!--

Only one word give credence to this piece "amen"

Connie