Comments : Hear Him Say He Loves Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Kira

    Awesome poem, I understand that feeling and it will take a while to get used ot not hearing that. This poem really captures the way we feel when we loose that person

  • 16 years ago

    by Shasya

    Something everyone can relate to...

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    This is a very sweet poem, keep writing!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a sad poem about a 'true love'

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    .....I meant to carry on! A love like this doesn't switch off like a light! It can smoulder away for a lifetime!!

    *hugs*

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Awesome write!! Great closure!
    Line 18 I think perhaps " he's sent me....", and knowing I wouldnot forget the lower case i's.

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    The poem flowed well..
    the first few stanzas were great..but the ending was pretty sad..it's an awesome poem though..
    keep up the good work. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by MELI

    OMG!! ii LOOOVE THiiS POEM =[ iiT MADE ME SAD.. AND iiT REALLY GRABBED MY ATTENTiION.. iIT HAD A GREAT ENDiING ii THiINK MANY PEOPLE CAN RELATE TO THiIS.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Thats so cute about the good morning texts, i know all about those.. :) really good poem, i enjoyed it a lot.