It's a good concept. And this poem certainly has emotions to touch. Only I think you can structure it in a better way. Just my personal opinion though. Well written.

Hey... this is really very beautifully written....
and very sad...

word choice is good... very emotional..

itna accha likha tune... very good ^_^

True love...... What a poem.... n wat a idea...

I always thought in this fast changing developing world... tru love is lost forever.. or on d verge of extinction..

ur poem shows some hope 2 broken hearts....

Good one ..

Keep sharing ur wonderful poems..

best wishes... karan

It held a lot of emotions, a really nice write.

5/5 From me

You expressed your emotions well, good work xxxx