I Want it Back

by ReapersPuppy   May 8, 2008


My blood runs cold the tears I weep
Are for the promises I could not keep
Why Do I lie What is the truth
I am still young with such old youth

Lifes passing by going way to fast
Wish I could go back to the past
I'd change what I have now became
I'd stop myself from going insane

My heart is racing I feel so hurt
Just lay me down under the dirt
Close my eyes and whisper Dear
I'll take away your pain and fear

Renew My innocence and my youth
Give me a chance to live the truth
Stuck in a book of lies and tales
Always trying just to fail

Give me a chance to be reborn
Take off this crown I have of thorns
Don't make me pay for my lost cost
Give me back,What I have lost..

    report violation
3


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 7 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Good piece, I really like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww i really liked reading this xx was very good xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by ReapersPuppy

    Thanks so much! this means alot to me to know that people actually like what I write,I'm very greatful for your comments! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Hey i love this poem... sometimes i look at how my life is and all the things i've done that i thought i would never do in my entire life... things that i never knew existed... somtime i feel so sick and twisted about the way my life in turning out and i wish i could go back and start it all over again. to be reborn! would be the greatest thing i could think of... but whose to say i wouldn't mess up again and or worse then i started. really good job, after reading this i'm thinking i'll start my own "New Life" i am making a vow right here and now that i will try and change... i can't be reborn but i can rebuild!

  • 16 years ago

    by XtiredoftryingX

    One great thing about that poem is that anyone who has ever gone through anything hard can relate...and the symbolism is really well. 5/5 : )

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By ReapersPuppy