One great thing about that poem is that anyone who has ever gone through anything hard can relate...and the symbolism is really well. 5/5 : )

Hey i love this poem... sometimes i look at how my life is and all the things i've done that i thought i would never do in my entire life... things that i never knew existed... somtime i feel so sick and twisted about the way my life in turning out and i wish i could go back and start it all over again. to be reborn! would be the greatest thing i could think of... but whose to say i wouldn't mess up again and or worse then i started. really good job, after reading this i'm thinking i'll start my own "New Life" i am making a vow right here and now that i will try and change... i can't be reborn but i can rebuild!

Thanks so much! this means alot to me to know that people actually like what I write,I'm very greatful for your comments! <3

Awww i really liked reading this xx was very good xxx

Good piece, I really like it!