Comments : Professional lover

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Aacha likha hai... good one...flow is ok..

    try improving your word choice... it would add more affect to you poem...

    overall a good read....

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    1 has 2 b a professional lover... wat a poem...

    2 hgood... keep it up..

    Best wishz...karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats good well done x