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by Lonely Rider
Aacha likha hai... good one...flow is ok.. try improving your word choice... it would add more affect to you poem... overall a good read....
by Prasad Baadkar
1 has 2 b a professional lover... wat a poem... 2 hgood... keep it up.. Best wishz...karan
by Baby Rainbow
Thats good well done x