Love the poem. It was a bit on the short side but honestly it was perfect. Short and to the point. Hard to explain but it was something nice to read.

-Daniel

Yes short and to the point... Its perfect as it is tho.. I absolutly love it.. It couldnt be better

Woww...I do love the simple poems because I think it is always direct and clear and urs was really nice...good job keep it up5/5..