The Locket Around My Neck

Applauds, i have a little white god locket around my neck, my boyfriend Dale, bought it for my birthday a few years ago. woop go the locket people. well anyway back to the poem.

i like the words you repeated such as special and everything it helps create the sense of that this someone and this locket is extremely valuable and very important to you, same as mine.

i also like teh way that you emphasised on a few things; as on a few lines, the last word of the line above is the same as the first word of the next line.

the poem was basic, but then people have to understand when you are dealing with love sometimes the words do not have to matter the whole concept of it is enough to matter, so the lanuage and the structure can be basic and you can still pull it off.

on the lats line though i don't think you need the capital letters, it kind of ruins it.

anyway good work
x

Very nice Baby.. love it!!.. Love you!!

Mm special poem and meaning behind it. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! 5./5