Comments : Freedom

  • 16 years ago

    by Im a poetic scholar

    Hey sis i luv this poem keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats sad but good work xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I loved this poem so much
    i feel like this so often

    i nominated you for the poetry contest : )
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    I like this poem 5/5..i feel ya on it

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I love love love diz part of da poem..

    "i feel like this bird captured
    and thrown in a cage,
    each day i act like i am
    having the time of my life.
    but really i just want to escape"

    5/5 great amazing most wonderful poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I guess we all feel this way sometimes. Good job. And thanks for the comment. =]

  • Wow. I really can connect to you with this one. Thats how it is at my house everyday I go to school and straight back home again. Its rare when I can get out. I am 18 but my parents say I live in there house and I have to do what they say. Can't wait for summer. I'm leaving. I can't stand it no more. Specially cuz now they want me to pay them. Very nice job love the poem 5/5

  • Wow. I really can connect to you with this one. Thats how it is at my house everyday I go to school and straight back home again. Its rare when I can get out. I am 18 but my parents say I live in there house and I have to do what they say. Can't wait for summer. I'm leaving. I can't stand it no more. Specially cuz now they want me to pay them. Very nice job love the poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    I love it!
    I feel totally like that...it freakin sucks!
    awesome poem anyhow!
    5/5