by Purple
Wow, I have to admit at times I had a hard time following, as in keeping everything straight, but the further I went the easier and more story like it seemed. |
Long but worth the read...great job...it was descriptive and I like that in poetry....keep writing! |
by noha
Waw |
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful write...Long but still I am glad i read it... good word choice.. |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats good, good length as it worked for the poem, well done x |
by Aryaan
I love this poem because it's so imaginative. It's long but at the same time very captivating too. Wonderful! |
by eehcuhhhz
Those who know lies begin to fall |
Beautiful a poem like a picture worth a thousand more words. this is going to be one of my favorites..keep writing like this please it was truly a wnderful write |
Oh this is beautiful!!!! I love it it's wonderful i'm really impressed, defiently beats alot of my poems hun^^ |
This was a very deep poem with a very strong emotion.......like it was so in tuned it's hard to grasp all at one time! I love how you used the methaphor of a bird and an angel it suited your writing style well |
Excellent job! Keep up the good work! |
by Sammerz
This poem was totally awsome amazing deep had really really strong emotions i loved the stanza you used how you chose your words. |
by reJoyce
Wow, sry for the short comment but that was impressive. the ending was dark mysterious and interesting, like edgar allen poe. Pretty. I live in Ohio too btw. Akron. |
by she
So horribly relatable |
This piece is pretty good. It is a bit abstract, but that's okay because I love abstract poems. They show more creativity and a difference course of thought and you have achieved that in this piece. Just a couple lines that I'm confused about, |
Wow! really good!! 5/5 |
by Syndicate
Whoa. That was so wonderful and the words just seemed to flow off the paper. The way you worded each stanza made it feel like the message was being burned into your skin. Very nice. Darkness and sadness with a touch of romance. I really liked this one. 5/5 |
Wow, ur an amazing writer. i totally got lost in it. 5/5 |
by Alexis
Beautiful. |
"Fallen angel beautiful loses her white |