by Spoken Silence May 8, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Believe. |
by rich sanchez
Awesome job i liked this one alot! these words are very true keep it up! :-) |
by Mister 47
Mm i dopnt know if youa re trying to make your self beleve in that ro make him beleve in that!! |
by Rachel RTVW
Too many I's my's me's my's. Meaningful sentiment but you could have structured the poem much better and not used all the filler words. I don't think it is good enough for the front page. |
by Marwa
Keep it up gud start! |
by Breeeezie
Waa!!!!!!!!!!!!! more tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |