I'm secretly in love with you

by ilu   May 8, 2008


I'm right here, I'm confused
I'm right here, why can you see right through?
Every day that passes by
Loving you is something I couldn't deny

Everything you see is not what it seems
Every night, you're the one who's in my dreams
Why was it so hard for you to see
That when you're near it's hard for me to breathe

Every single day I patiently wait
Because all I wanted was for you to stay
Was it too hard for you to feel
That I'm so fed up for having to conceal

You gave me enough reason to smile each day
Because my sky was dark until you came
My world was nothing better than it is now
Now, that I knew that someone like you exist

If someday you'll know what everything should be
Maybe you'll realize how much I bleed
But I'll be here and always waiting
Because my heart beats for you as long as I'm breathing

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a good poem.

    I'm right here, I'm confused
    I'm right here, why can you see right through?

    Favorite line. each of your beginning lines are very well done. They are the starting. The first two lines are the best out of each sentence.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sunnah

    LOVE IT
    It ROcks
    wish you all the best of love and success
    sunnah
    from egypt

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Nice ending of the poem.

    I'm right here I'm confused
    = I'm right here and I'm confused
    ^ I think that would be better with the (and)

    Keep writing!
    Thanks for the comment.