Spell check it.
You spelled proven wrong on the very first line.
Fifth stanza as well.

I'm tryin' to understand your poem.
I can't.
To be quite honest, it's just too loud in my house right now.

But...I don't think I your ending.
Maybe you should change it?

I guess what I didn't like about it is sayin' sittin' on your computer.

I dont' know why.

Sorry if I couldn't be of any help :[

Cool work.