Nice poem very well written

Very deep and well written. I enjoyed the emotional tide that moved within your work.

Lots of emotions and thoughts you've expressed here. The poem has came straight from you heart and it flows that way. It seems you've written it the way it cam out from your mind. I've found it interesting. Thoughtful... well done!

This is so painful, a poem that's very rich with emotions and feelings and sadness..
I am drowned with the emotions expressed over here.

the poem has a very strong structure but a terrriblee meter dude..lke the way you place the words and lines needs revision.. it sets the flow off.

you had a verryyyy breathtaking opening and closing lines for me, but few exppressions were weaker..

however you depressed me..I am touched and impressed...you have a very unique way with words..

great!
5/5 excellent piece

Well written and very deep