Hypnagogic

by BlueEyedMystery   May 8, 2008


Mollify the ache of a fractured soul.
Bring back together what was once had.
Inimical dreams of a heart still whole.
Parlous are your violent stained lips.

You're falling,
faster than your brain can comprehend.
Floating in nothing.
Not crashing or landing.
Just existing.

A heart that is impassible cannot love.

Gasp for air, you're going under,
drowning in ink, that saved your life.
Clutch tight to the hand outstretched,
let the soporific voice sing you to sleep.

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Okay, so I don't really write free verse, but I tried one. ><

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kelin Hurt

    I like the title of the poem. I've never see anything before I fall asleep.

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Wow very unique write. i didnt even know a few of the words :] i really like the part about "just existing" life feels like that sometimes. beautiful ending

  • 16 years ago

    by RObC

    Well I must agree with the other comments your poetry is captivating I will defiantly have to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    Wow you don't write much freeverse? i would have never known.
    i wouldn't change a thing in this poem,

    "Floating in nothing.
    Not crashing or landing.
    Just existing."

    ^^LOVE THIS!!!
    5/5
    ~Toni~

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This free verse poem is really good for being your first.. i think you did a great job.. from beginning to end. but i have to say the ending was my favorite part. great job. 5/5 keep it up!

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