Comments : Will Time Pass Me On

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    I can relate. im so lost right now in my thoughts and time is my worst enemy. i resent clocks.

    Good way of expressing this feeling. i like the repetitive style. keep it up. This is a beautiful work, sorry for my lack of enthusiasm.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very well expressed, good talent keep writing xx