Wow, this poem is very good. It put a smile on my face.
"I'm going mad
I'm going crazy
But no worries love,
it's all for you"
I like this part, don't "mad" and "crazy" mean the same thing? But it sounded very well in this poem. This is one of my favorite parts in this poem.
"for it's you that I desire
it's you that I need
I yearn for your touch,
the smell of your hair
that smile of yours..."
I love this part, I love your choice of wording here. This has a lot of depth and emotion. I loved it.
"Nothing in this world
is worth more to me then you
for you are my heart,my soul
Without you I'm through"
Such honesty and passion, its beautiful.
"I'm willing to wait,day or night
A second or forever
I'll wait for you until I die
cause nothing will ever matter
until you and I are together
my love... "
And I shall wait forever for you, because there is no one else on this earth that I would wait for, just for you, because you are worth it. Mahal kita.