Comments : I shall wait

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Wow, this poem is very good. It put a smile on my face.

    "I'm going mad
    I'm going crazy
    But no worries love,
    it's all for you"

    I like this part, don't "mad" and "crazy" mean the same thing? But it sounded very well in this poem. This is one of my favorite parts in this poem.

    "for it's you that I desire
    it's you that I need
    I yearn for your touch,
    the smell of your hair
    that smile of yours..."

    I love this part, I love your choice of wording here. This has a lot of depth and emotion. I loved it.

    "Nothing in this world
    is worth more to me then you
    for you are my heart,my soul
    Without you I'm through"

    Such honesty and passion, its beautiful.

    "I'm willing to wait,day or night
    A second or forever
    I'll wait for you until I die
    cause nothing will ever matter
    until you and I are together
    my love... "

    And I shall wait forever for you, because there is no one else on this earth that I would wait for, just for you, because you are worth it. Mahal kita.