Yet She Still Finds Time To Simle

by always the same   May 9, 2008


Rain is pouring down onto the streets
Her bestfriend just abandoned her
She failed the biggest test of the year
Yet she still finds time to smile.

She can never please anyone
Her kind acts are never enough
She's all alone in this world
Yet she still finds time to smile.

Everything around her is changing
She makes mistakes all the time
So many sleepless nights are ahead of her.
Yet she still finds time to smile.

Shes sitting in a corner
The sun has just set and its dark
Shes almost lost all hope
Yet she still finds time to smile.

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  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Poems that don't rhyme usually don't catch my eye, but this one did.
    it was a great write and you made it clear of how you feel/felt.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, it sounds a very lonely poem and you have created that feeling well by your smooth flow and style of writing.

    this is good work keep it up xx