Comments : CHANGES , LIKE THE SEASONS

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    I like the poem.It goes well with the title.and I agree with the person above that wrote the last comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by JD

    "Life can be as beautiful, as A garden of flowers,
    Once you destroy all the weeds."

    True that.
    Reminds me of that saying i once heard.
    "To get the rainbow you have to put up with the rain."
    its like saying, to get to the good part in life, you deal with the bad part.
    Destroying the weeds is like dealing with the bad part, and then all of a sudden theres a beautiful flower garden in front of you (good part)
    This was amazingly written.
    You have talent.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Praise be the Lord- he has truely blessed you as this is a lovely piece of work- keep it up!
    This has been written very well with the structure, layout, poem and usage of lovely words.

    Chinwe

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Hey Jim, I love the poem. I think your answer to the questions in my poem you read are a very positive and truthful optimistic way of looking at life even at its worste. thanks!
    -Rachel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyn

    Thank you so much Jim, for sending me this poem. It's a great write, one verse jumped out at me I kept reading it over:

    'Winter behind, brighter days ahead,
    Onward I travel in my chosen direction,
    The winter of my blind eyes now dead,
    For God has filled me with love and
    affection.

    I just love that verse and relate to it so much.
    Thank you again