Comments : It's what you do to me

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    This would have to be one of the most sentimental poems ive read. It's so honest and beautiful.

    -With her delicate touch she brought down walls of steel
    Walls that didn't allow me to live, and didn't allow me to feel-

    I love these lines because I hope one day I meet someone that will love me for who i am and that I will be able to let into my heart and trust them.

    Beautiful work! 5/5