What were you thinking making a choice like this
"I can not get my head over it
We once told each other everything.
But you lie to my face
And tell me that is all I do to you.
When you use me for your lies
And tell people that you never what to se me again"

^^ this is so painful.... I felt so sad at the betrayal... very beautifully described...

one typo
'And tell people that you never what to se me again'-- what = want , Se=See

very emotional...very hearfelt...

good write... keep writing.. :)

I feel like there's mixed emotions, but I'm not gonna say anything was bad about this piece. Personally I am currently unable t write a poem about my backstabbing friend because the betrayal is too fresh. SO good job for being able to communicate your emotions.

Nothing will ever be the same
When you come back crying
With a baby on your hip.
He will leave you when it gets to hard
And that baby has colic and cries.
^ Sad! But true. =[ It happens all the time, and all we ever wish is that its us that dont fall for the dreamy player.

Good Work =]

-KAitlyn.