My kind

by Brandon Lee   May 9, 2008


For all my kind, there is no peace of mind.
It's as though with in my soul a window darker than the blackest hole.
It leaves only misery and destruction, which by all is tainted left open to corruption.
Even if I plead, I can find no peace.
Thats my kinds creed something which we can never leave.
Left praying only for our hearts resurrection.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very deep and short. I feel like there could be more, but oh well. Great imagery and descriptions. 5/5 from me, take care...

  • 16 years ago

    by StillxBreathing

    Short and powerful.
    love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "For all my kind, there is no peace of mind."

    Good rhyme scheme

    "It's as though with in my soul a window darker than the blackest hole."

    Good imagery.

    "It leaves only misery and destruction,"

    Perfect contrast.

    "Even if I plead, I can find no peace.
    Thats my kinds creed something which we can never leave.
    Left praying only for our hearts resurrection. "

    I like your ending. It started off well and ended perfectly. I would have preferred if you made this poem longer but the way it is is great.

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