"For all my kind, there is no peace of mind."

Good rhyme scheme

"It's as though with in my soul a window darker than the blackest hole."

Good imagery.

"It leaves only misery and destruction,"

Perfect contrast.

"Even if I plead, I can find no peace.
Thats my kinds creed something which we can never leave.
Left praying only for our hearts resurrection. "

I like your ending. It started off well and ended perfectly. I would have preferred if you made this poem longer but the way it is is great.

Short and powerful.
love it

Very deep and short. I feel like there could be more, but oh well. Great imagery and descriptions. 5/5 from me, take care...