by Spoken Silence May 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
** This is a poem that me and Lethal Prophecy wrote together. Enjoy!.** |
by The Prince
This is so beautiful, I'm glad I read it :) |
by Rachel RTVW
Too many I's , me's, my's, the flow is off, too many filler words. It was a nice sentiment but not deserving of the front page. I thought I commented on this poem already. My criticism must have magically disappeared. You have to take both the good and the bad. Perhaps your friends don't give an honest opinion. Sorry, I will. |
by Marwa
So sweetttt!!!!!!!!!! |
by benjamin
Wow .. thats a handfull of words to say to someone.. great symbolisim and i love how you say shes everything .. the one that makes you live.. |
by BeMusEd
Great poem... Very full of emotions.. And I think you are very much inlove.. Congrats... |