by Marc Ortiz
Well it was a long poem but it's a great poem full of emotions. Btw if you write a poem with another person it's called a Collab :) so you should change the title to: 'Spoken Prophecy (Collab)' |
First i wud like 2 congragulate u for giving tis site 100 glorious poems.. tat talked n made sumone laugh, taught, made sumone cry, smile, learn.... n made sumones day... |
by Brad Quammen
This poem is so beautiful and true.I swear I will never stop loving you. Mahal kita,Iniibig kita my love ;) |
by tristan
To describe it in one word i would describe it as beutifull 5 stars |
by tristan
Made me cry thanks iv not cryd because of words in a while |
by BeMusEd
Great poem... Very full of emotions.. And I think you are very much inlove.. Congrats... |
by benjamin
Wow .. thats a handfull of words to say to someone.. great symbolisim and i love how you say shes everything .. the one that makes you live.. |
by Marwa
So sweetttt!!!!!!!!!! |
by Rachel RTVW
Too many I's , me's, my's, the flow is off, too many filler words. It was a nice sentiment but not deserving of the front page. I thought I commented on this poem already. My criticism must have magically disappeared. You have to take both the good and the bad. Perhaps your friends don't give an honest opinion. Sorry, I will. |
by The Prince
This is so beautiful, I'm glad I read it :) |