Comments : Spoken Prophecy (Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a long poem but it's a great poem full of emotions. Btw if you write a poem with another person it's called a Collab :) so you should change the title to: 'Spoken Prophecy (Collab)'

    Your heart is like a compass to me,
    - Good simile

    The arrow is always leading me to you.
    - I love this line. Damn I never thought of this.. it was EXCELLENT!

    My love for you is like a circle,
    Once I get to the top I fall in love with you all over again
    - Another great line!

    ARGH I can't find my favorite stanza everything in this poem is perfect!

    I can tell that you two really worked really hard on this poem. I have never wrote a poem with anyone before and I can feel that writing a poem with another person is hard.

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    First i wud like 2 congragulate u for giving tis site 100 glorious poems.. tat talked n made sumone laugh, taught, made sumone cry, smile, learn.... n made sumones day...

    N tis poem was one more gem in d eye of time...

    U r doing a marvellous job n u hav marvellous thoughts..

    Wish u good luck 4 d next 100..

    Keep sharing ur knowledge..

    Best wishes,

    Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    This poem is so beautiful and true.I swear I will never stop loving you. Mahal kita,Iniibig kita my love ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by tristan

    To describe it in one word i would describe it as beutifull 5 stars

  • 16 years ago

    by tristan

    Made me cry thanks iv not cryd because of words in a while

  • 16 years ago

    by BeMusEd

    Great poem... Very full of emotions.. And I think you are very much inlove.. Congrats...

    Keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by benjamin

    Wow .. thats a handfull of words to say to someone.. great symbolisim and i love how you say shes everything .. the one that makes you live..

  • 16 years ago

    by Marwa

    So sweetttt!!!!!!!!!!
    keep da poem up luvin dis!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's , me's, my's, the flow is off, too many filler words. It was a nice sentiment but not deserving of the front page. I thought I commented on this poem already. My criticism must have magically disappeared. You have to take both the good and the bad. Perhaps your friends don't give an honest opinion. Sorry, I will.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    This is so beautiful, I'm glad I read it :)
    Lovely work
    5/5