"I embrace her and smell the scent of the sweet nectar of life,
a scent of all that is perfection."

I love this line in the poem. Its just amazing. and It just flows perfectly and I can actually picture this happening.

"like a waterfall within the mountains of bliss."

Good use of smilie

"As the world turns,
I feel joy in knowing that I am where you once were,
though you are always with me.
If you were the sun,
and I was the moon,
there'd be neither day or night,
just me and you"

Favorite stanza! I love this, when I first read this I smiled and thought it sounded so familiar but yet so original I loved it.

Great poem but i think you are just trying to keep me from voting for mself in the contest this week and thats a cheap trick (but it might just work )