Travis

by Spoken Silence   May 9, 2008


** Travis is a baby I take care of at an orphanage. This is a poem to him. **

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11 months ago your mother left you,
I understand how you feel,
As my mother left me as well.
You don't understand anything just yet.
You're so young so small with so much love.

She left you an orphan,
And you can't bare,
Yet you smile, you laugh and you play with my hair.
Every time I come see you,
You jump up and down.
As If I'm the only person whose worth to love around.
I take care of you and treat you as my own.

Even though I'm young you are like my son.
You are still a baby, the cutest of all,
I can't see why she would leave you
All wrapped up in a ball.
You call me "Ma, ma"
Even though you don't know,
I wish I could tell you
And say everything you need to know.
But you are young,
A baby, the cutest of all.

I am jealous of the fact that you smile,
You laugh and play around,
Though your mother isn't here.
Maybe it's because you don't understand,
Or don't know anything else besides what's here.
You shall be in my heart as I am in yours.
You might not remember me once you leave.
But you will remember the love you have from me.
So Baby Travis, as you stare up at me.
Know that I love you, and that shall always, always be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Thanks lol, I didnt notice that. I need to remember to check poems before I submit them. I'm doing that now. But when I wrote this I didnt. lol thank you

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    You are still are baby, the cutest of all,

    One too many ares in there and stick in an a. :)

    Why are you jealous of him? Because ignorance is bliss?

    This was a lovely poem. The rhyming was a bit ADD, but besides that. It was lovely. I could picture every heartbreaking and heartwarming moment in this poem. It was perfect. Five out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this poem this poem could be entered in tell your story contest dhs story

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Sad but buetiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Gilbertson

    Very touching and sincere but yet there was sadness and confusion and hurt among the joy, beautifully written.
    There were parts that could of flowed better, and you could change things to make this piece outstanding as in the words you chose even though they work as they are they could be better.

    Good work,
    Kaitlyn