My Vampire Love

by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave   May 9, 2008


The moon is out
its so full and bright.
My fangs glow white

I look at you
It was only a couple of hours ago
you were sucking on my blood.

Your fangs are red
You smile at me.

I walk over and set by you
You put your head in my lap
I rest my hand on your head.

If I only knew that you were a vampire before
I would have given you my life.

I ask you why you changed me.
And you only say "I love you"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh my gosh, i like absolutely loved this poem. it was just amazing. you have such a stunning style of writing. it was such an amazing poem and was portrayed in such a dark yet beautiful manner, it was just perfect, your use of words went together really well. keep up the outstanding work. 10/5 :)
    ***take care***
    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave

    Thank you all and I also love vampires and well this poem I made on the spot. I guess its really good. But Thank you!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lilith Chaotica

    That was awsome! I love vampires. If they existed, I'd date one. But anyway Great job keep doing what you do.

  • 16 years ago

    by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave

    I would love that!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    Ill be your vampire

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