by Dustin S May 9, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Anger, hatred, all the pain! |
I like your rhyme scheme, you did very well with that. And your flow was very good as well. Keep up the good work :D |
by X Harlea X
Nice |
I like your rhyme scheme and the rhythm of this poem/song. Its good work. You should finish this though it would be a whole lot better if you did. Good job with what your doing though :D keep up the good work. You should check out some of my poetry sometime |