The Heart I Stained on my Palm [So Let's Freeze it]

by A Perfect Lie   May 9, 2008


As we lay in this soft candle light; Baby, you don't know,
How I wish that my love for you, in this instant, would show.

[So let's freeze it.]

The mesmerizing look in your eyes; twinkling and cyan-blue,
Entwined fingertips lay locked, heart beating erratically for you.

[So let's freeze it.]

Tracing my finger, slowly, around the intricate beauty of your face,
The love we share, so gentle; full of admiration, charm and grace.

[So let's freeze it.]

Interwoven thoughts, my future; your breath keeps me alive,
Memories carved in ice so sensually, your love helps me survive.

[So let's freeze it.]

Ink flows around my body; from that heart I stained on my palm,
Our names permanently laced within it; leaving me delicately calm.

[So let's freeze it.]

As we lay in this soft candle light; Baby, you don't know,
How I wish that my love for you, in this instant, would show.

[So let's freeze it.]
[Freeze this moment in time.]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I really enjoyed reading this! Was it written to be a song? It has that lyrical, musical feel to it and its beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    Aaaawwww thats so sweet!!

    its really well written with a good choice of words, its strong and powerful and so honest...

    she's luck to have you

    keep up the good work hun!!!

    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by william

    I know how that feels and i hope the memory never fades its this sortof thing that keeps future hope alive. good poem, thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    A wonderful poem. No need to explain. I nominated it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    WOW This was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read I was like glued to the screen reading I wanted to read more and more You have an amazing talent

    =)

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